That was incredibly powerful, and so sad. Your descriptions of your settings are well-done. But what makes this is your characters, and the way you describe their emotions. Your Snape was very well-done. It's so sad but believable that he would completely miss the lesson and hide in his shell.
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Ravenclaw Blues
LoL Snape cursing Ravenclaws... I liked the story a lot.... i hope you continue writing :-)
Author's Response:
Ravenclaw Blues