very good job so far. one thing- i think youspelt "dessert" as "desert", when Sirius caught Remus and Saphire kissing. :) otherwise, grest job. very descriiptive, and i also like the idea about the cat. i loved the ending, too. can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oops, I did spell that wrong! I love Lupine; thanks for mentioning her!