What a nice chapter!
Really enjoyed all the interaction between the characters, it's interesting reading about what the Marauders might've been like when younger - and the whole Remus &  Romulus thing is intriguing!
Well done for some excellent writing.
TW*

story is getting longer and i like it. it is really sweet and i still like the pairings although i got a bit confused on when sirius took over james' girlfriend, but im glad they did, they fit much better. to comment the ending of this chapter: i think and hope she says yes cause if not i feel really bad for james.

all in all a very nice and definetly hilarious story, keep writing so ill know how this ends!

hopes up and fingers crossed for a new chapter soon, Annabelle

Hm...your writing is good, but you may have gotten this warning before; take care not to make your character, particularly Sapphire, a Mary-Sue. She is already beautiful, innocent (this could be read as "pure") powerful (an Unregistered Animagus), and caring. She also has a lot of boys after her, and is popular. Be sure to give her flaws. The only one that you have listed so far is her naivete, which is a bit of a virtue as well.

I thought that you could've showed more emotion on Sapphire's part when she found out the news about her mother, and when she found out about Remus. While James, Sirius, Peter, and others were quite accepting of Lupin's...furry little problem...remember that a large part of the wizarding world distrusts werewolves. I'd like to see more shock on Sapphire's part.

Absolutely great... can't wait to read more. I really like the relationship choices, can only say: keep writing :)