Very interesting concept. One of the best fanfics I've read in a long time.
Keep up the good work, and keep the updates coming!
I loved how you told us that Harry threw out the picture, but we didn't find out until afterwards what it was of and what it meant. Yet another creative idea. I do like this line:
“I have faith that you will figure things out in due time.” Dumbledore nodded.
It really shows how Dumbledore acts, and I think that's great characterization. Very original and great story so far!
I do love this line at the end:
“May your dreams be better then mine.”
So true, and it really shows how much Harry goes through. The people's reactions who were following Harry when he allowed them to know he knew he was being followed were great. I could just see that happening, and Harry doing that. Great job!