Chapter 8: This Thing of Yours
Reviews For Make A Wish
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 08:43 pm
This story should so be titled 'Mr Black goes on vacation'.
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 08:32 pm
Oh man...poor Harry. Australian backpackers? Ouch.
Fun bit with the Phoenix tears and basilisk venom.
Chapter 7: It's in the Blood
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 08:23 pm
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 08:05 pm
Fascinating butterfly effect you have going on here. I love how you wrote the Lovegoods.
Chapter 5: In which we meet the Intrepid Reporter Mrs White
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 07:58 pm
Farnsworth. Hah.
Interesting how Harry is just going about his business leaving chaos in his wake. The 'accidental hero' motif is amusing.
Chapter 4: Welcome to the City of Lights
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 07:50 pm
I'm not sure I like the idea of Harry suddenly turning into an expert on all things Death Eater, but I can see where he drew his conclusions from.
Interesting story.
Chapter 3: Tip Toe through the Tulips
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 07:42 pm
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/11/2007 07:34 pm
Kinda a rocky beginning; I'm not sure where you're starting this in the timeline, but I'm interested to see where it goes.
Chapter 1: Goodbye
Reviewer: Akroma (Anonymous)
01/22/2007 10:34 pm
I find it confusing what the point of view changes. I think it would be easier if you added a blank line between sections, or some other divider. Other than that, I like the story
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Thank You.
Chapter 6: A Series of Fortunate Events
Reviewer: miss_songbreeze (Anonymous)
10/15/2006 06:58 pm
this story makes me laugh!!! I love it!!! They think Harry's leaving clues and he's not. It's so funny!!!
keep up the brilliant writting!
Chapter 8: This Thing of Yours