Oh man...poor Harry. Australian backpackers? Ouch.
Fun bit with the Phoenix tears and basilisk venom.
Interesting how Harry is just going about his business leaving chaos in his wake. The 'accidental hero' motif is amusing.
I'm not sure I like the idea of Harry suddenly turning into an expert on all things Death Eater, but I can see where he drew his conclusions from.
I find it confusing what the point of view changes. I think it would be easier if you added a blank line between sections, or some other divider. Other than that, I like the story
this story makes me laugh!!! I love it!!! They think Harry's leaving clues and he's not. It's so funny!!!
keep up the brilliant writting!