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Reviewer: Tanydwr (Anonymous)
04/26/2007 08:12 am

Awesome!

A little confused as to the precise relationship between Hermione and Harry, but not too bad.  Just say they're cousins - that always worked in history, no matter how far apart people were!

Keep up the great work and update soon.

 Lol, Tanydwr




Chapter 5
Reviewer: Bill (Anonymous)
03/01/2007 11:03 am
The premises for this story are very interesting, I like the potter legilmency, the McGon connection discovery, and Rufus and Percy attempting to figure it out   Please write on!


Chapter 5
Reviewer: MarauderQueen (Signed)
10/07/2006 01:36 am
Please update soon!!! I want to find out what happens next!!! This is a great story with an unexpected twist in it.


Chapter 3
Reviewer: KenF (Anonymous)
07/18/2006 11:19 am

Well, this looks like fun.




Chapter 3
Reviewer: jayley (signed) (Anonymous)
05/10/2006 05:38 pm
cool!!! can't wait to see what happens in your fic!!!


Chapter 1
Reviewer: ZanyMuggle (Signed)
05/09/2006 01:08 am

It's sad to see your earlier work just disappear.  Could you have left it unfinished, and given a new name to the new work?

 Regardless, I enjoyed this prologue.  It seems to be a portent of good things to come.




Prologue
Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
05/08/2006 12:34 am

What a wonderful prologue, Roy!  :)  It is quite intruiging to wonder what the next moves on the chessboard will be, and I hope that The Dark Tosser (as Bill likes to call him) gets quite the comeuppance, and it sounds like he's going to in the end!!!!

All in all, wonderful train-of-thought progression.  You are developing this rather mysterious character beautifully so far.     




Prologue
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