*LOL*  I haven't ever thought of Filch like this before - fascinating bit of writing.  I love Irma Pince, and the hints that she's less than a stellar witch.

And Filch and the twins drinking.  That was hilarious.  Awesome writing. 

I really, really enjoyed this. You've got Filch nailed down. I particularly like the "wasp" references there toward the beginning--very appropriate for a man with a temper like a wet hornet. And of course, how many of us have always pictured Filch and Pince together?

This was quite brilliant, dark and brooding, yet clever and humorous. Nice job, very nice.

Reading a story about Argus Filch was certainly a different fan fic experience!  You've really nailed his character and did a great job of blending the very serious events of HBP with the humour and pathos of Filch's past and the influences that shaped him.

An unexpected appearace by the "Evil Weasel Twins" is always a gift to the reader.  Nicely done!

LSV