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Reviewer: LoneStarVamp (Signed)
05/25/2006 05:43 pm
Well written and psychologically intense. An excellent - and disturbing - foray into the mind of one of JKR's darkest characters. Nicely done!


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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
05/18/2006 05:42 pm

Sorry, scratch those last two.  I don't know how they printed.  (Hope someone in Admin deletes them.) 

 Anyway I wanted to say how much I like this.  You set and hold the mood and characterizations exceptionally  well. 

Under your pen, Bella burns; her passion stings.  You've gotten to the core of her persona: a brilliant, warped, energetic woman driven over the edge by jealousy and thwarted ambition.  And your wit makes us almost enjoy it: 

"If there was one thing she hated more than not having answers, it was being told them by someone who had no right to be right."

And that marriage/initiation vow crackles with emotion and energy.

 Write on, oh Lady!




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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
05/18/2006 05:31 pm

If there was one thing she hated more than not having answers, it was being told them by someone who had no right to be right.

 And that vow! Crackling with emotion and energy.




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Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl (Signed)
05/11/2006 03:33 pm
Woah... that is really, really creepy... which is wonderful, of course ;-)  Great job!!



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Reviewer: mugglenet27 (Signed)
05/06/2006 10:12 pm

geez...I might as well pull my story from this challenge *laughs*...goodness.  I'm being outdone left and right!  awesome story, larnagrace.  Bellatrix is quite well characterized :D




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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
05/06/2006 12:40 pm
It's really awesome.... I hope you have put it in the summer angst challange Grace.... I see a potential winner here :)



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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
05/06/2006 11:22 am

Wow, that was great, Larna!! I adore how you did Bella in here. We don't see her much in the books, and only really get to see the Death Eater side of her. You portrayed her perfectly for the situation. Wonderful, and good luck on the challenge! :D




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