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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
05/06/2006 07:20 pm
nice start, good job. update soon


Author's Response: I will update within the next week.  Thank you for your kind words.



Prologue - Perhaps a Tablespoon
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
05/05/2006 12:56 pm
this is a promising start.   the dialogue is a litttle stiff though...   but i see great potential here.

Author's Response: Thank you very much... I have a little trouble with dialogue... I will try to loosen it up a little though... Thanks for reading!!



Prologue - Perhaps a Tablespoon
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