Author's Response: I will update within the next week. Thank you for your kind words.
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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Soul of Evil
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
05/06/2006 07:20 pm
nice start, good job. update soon
Author's Response: I will update within the next week. Thank you for your kind words.
Author's Response: I will update within the next week. Thank you for your kind words.
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
05/05/2006 12:56 pm
this is a promising start. the dialogue is a litttle stiff though... but i see great potential here.
Author's Response: Thank you very much... I have a little trouble with dialogue... I will try to loosen it up a little though... Thanks for reading!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much... I have a little trouble with dialogue... I will try to loosen it up a little though... Thanks for reading!!
Prologue - Perhaps a Tablespoon