amazing, i'm hooked, great start...hope there is more to come
How touching and very reminisant of The Notebook, one of my favorites. I too have a story in which Harry has lost touch with reality so I really liked this piece. It touches on the suject of altzhymers a terrible disiase that effects way too many people. I would love to read more of your stories, I enjoyed your style.
That was a very sad story! Why was Harry in the Closed Ward though? What happened to him? How did he get sick?
Aww, that was so sad. I feel so sorry for Harry, how you portray him is really great. I loved this, though it had me close to tears.
I liked how you kept Brian's real identity out of it until the very end. It was a nice touch. Amazing job!
That... that... oh! I'm crying, I am. This is horrible, horrible and brilliant and OH it is eating my heart alive. The beginning, and then the ending, oh, the ENDING, oh...
Masterful. You slaughtered me with this. Amazing work.
How sad! To know your father only as a figure lying in bed, with brief moments of clarity only. You made me cry!