As amusing as this was I think it would be even better if you actually had a plot. These sort of fics should always be kept short and sweet.
No straining of the brain for me. I just loved the story. A romp--and love the vegan refs. And the description of Dudley reminds me of an old Garfield cartoon where he was in much the same shape, his define moment being when Jon says, "Garfield, look at you. You can't even see your feet anymore," and Garfield replies, "Feet? I have feet?"
COOL DAWG, YOU DID SO GOOD AND I THINK THIS FIC IS IT, LIKE THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD OK>!
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE ABOUT THIS SHIT LIKE HARRY SLEEPING, GETTING DRESSED, BLAH BLAH BLHA. GOOD LUCK MY HOMIE!!!!
Thanks a lot! I think I may need some help with some of the later chapters. Let me know if you think you could help out....
Also..., well I'll tell you later.
very interesting first chapter.... i have honestly never read anything as random as this before and it was funny
I'm glad you're posting here and hope to see you post in the forums and visit the chat more often
Author's Response: Thanks! I think the second chapter needs some work - it's probably too confusing. I took a look at the forums, but they're a bit intimidating at first - since there are quite a lot of them.