Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I am planning on going back over the Diagon Alley scene ... but I needed to step away from it for at least a few days, fresh eyes ya know? I really appreciate the information!!!
A good first fanfic. It developed a little too fast - the Death Eaters sort of seemed to come out of nowhere, there - but I love your characterization of Padma. I'm so glad you wrote this! :) Just needs a little polish, is all.
Author's Response: I am planning on going back over it ... but I wanted to wait a bit ... so it wasn't so fresh. Thanks soooo much Larna for taking time to read it!!! I really appreciate the input.