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Reviews For Hang On
Reviewer: Mistress_Genari (Signed)
04/28/2006 11:59 am
Reviewer: Arnel (Signed)
04/27/2006 02:05 am
Cute story. You did a nice job interweaving the lyrics with Harry's and Ginny's perspectives. Your best line was Harry commenting on Ron's eating habits.
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Reviewer: teenfan101 (Signed)
04/26/2006 09:50 pm
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/26/2006 06:00 am
This was okay. It was funny, because at the beginning I wanted you to develop your sentences more, but then once you got past the song lyrics your sentences were beautiful and it was just the plot that developed too fast. An emotionally charged piece, though, and it works, but I do think you should have slowed down the ending a bit there, because it sort of came out of nowhere.
Good work, though!
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