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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:42 pm
You explain Hermione's personality--not just her precocity, but her loneliness--with a stillborn younger sister.  That makes sense.  The laughter goes out of the house; her mother treats her as a small adult.


Chapter 26
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:37 pm

Hermione and Augusta is a neat conversation.  An Augusta suggeating a Muggle car for school.  Love it all.




Chapter 25
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:23 pm
I'm glad they met Hermione.  Interesting that she didn't know what she was doing was magic until they told her.  A very natural way to get young pre-Hogwarts kids together


Chapter 24
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:16 pm
The best reason for magic--two messy little boys in the kitchen.


Chapter 22
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:13 pm
Aw...love the way te bys cheer Lily up, especially Neville's:

“Then there’s no reason to be sad, ‘cause Gran says everyone’s happy there, and one day we’ll all be together again, right?”




Chapter 21
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:11 pm
Hee-hee.  I love that James is still alive.  you find such neat things for him to do with his sons!


Chapter 20
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:07 pm

That's 'wither' not 'whither' (not even in Brit-speak i don't think.) 

T-shirts with a mild cheering charm--perfect for adults shepherding loquacious children about a fair that won't open for another half hour.

Oh gawd, the trick was brilliant!!!  ***laughing uncontrollably and its AYF***




Chapter 19
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 01:02 pm
Uh-oh, what's next?  Love the "ain't dead yet" slogan.  Makes me think somehow of the Monty Py plague sketch. 


Chapter 18
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 12:58 pm
Never heard that song before.  Can't wait for the next chapter.


Chapter 17
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/24/2007 12:56 pm
Ha--ha!  Now Lily is instructing James about the Muggle world, and his questions don't sound much different than the boys' (except that the words are a little bigger.)


Chapter 16
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