Reviews For Pain

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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/24/2006 08:57 pm

Very emotionally charged; I really felt this piece. Great job on that. Watch the grammar, though: there were a few times when you had minor errors that took away from the content.

Overall, good job.




Chapter 1
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/24/2006 04:17 pm
aww. That was sad, but I loved it. You showed Harry's character perfectly. awesome job, 10/10



Chapter 1
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