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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
04/24/2006 02:11 pm

hey Ashley I loved the one shot. There are a few typos here and there (well I shouldn;t give criticism like that cosidering my story is full of them)

I have just begun reading the daughter of lord voldemort. i haven't ignored it at all. it's just that i got a job and havn't had time to go through it

It looks very interesting though. I love the originality of the characters and the way it's going

cheers-jd 



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Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
04/23/2006 03:27 pm
That was beautifully written. I haven't had the chance to read the entire story yet, but once my finals are finished, I plan to do just that. Keep up the great work!


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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/23/2006 10:34 am
I like the addition of a bit more internal conflict, with what Angel is planning to do with Voldemort/Tom. Angel almost seems human here, vulnerable. That would be hard, such strong memories coming back.

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