awsome awsome awsome
cant wait for the next chapter.
loved the way you set up the harry hermione stuff so far and was a tad bit surprisd at the luna bit but not by much.
Thanks for the review, Riven. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.
I like to read relationships that have both depth and substance, so I want to write them in the same way.
As to the Luna bit, More than Human was started after OotP, and from the interactions in HBP, I didn't see that the pair couldn't be compatible in a dating relationship. Ron showed his Gryffindor tendancies in coming to Luna's defense against her tormentors, which I think is a very canon trait in Ron when he is with his friends. Luna is a friend by the end of the OotP.
Besides, why can't Ron actually be a trailblazer amongst the trio once and awhile? ;-)
Thanks for reading, Destin. I'm glad that you've enjoyed the story so far.
Any group of friends can have quite the ring-around-the-relationships, so I want to be as honest and realistic as possible. A large component to attraction can be learning that someone likes you and sometimes it is a shock to learn someone you already admire returns the sentiment. Harry is coming slowly to realize this, but after all he's a boy and they're dense...;-)
i like the spider fight but not the going back to the castle so soon. it might have been better to have make it last 2 or 3 chapters but o well.
cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Well, they haven't gone back to the castle yet, as you will see in the next chapter...;-D