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Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
05/04/2006 02:41 pm
AAAHHHRRRGGHHH!!!!!   good cliffy! the monty python quote was pricless! i know you just had to find a way to sneak that in there!   hope you explain why ginny and harry arn't together, when its obvious they were for a while.   awsome story!

Author's Response: As a Monty Python fan, how could I resist? Good on you for spotting it, so keep your eyes open for any other fan references. We'll get to see why H and G lost their way in a little while, so keep this scene in mind. Thanks for reviewing!



In Memories
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
05/04/2006 01:57 pm
ah noble harry and his conflicting emotions!   man thsi is a good story, and the way you discribe the double's creation...  your an amazing author!   great story!


The Leave-Taking
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
05/04/2006 01:36 pm
first off i love your characterization of moody, as far as i'm concerned its dead on.   second the way dumbledore and moody communicated was brilliant!   harry's two best friends reactions couldn't be better.   this is one amazing story!

Author's Response:

Moody's one of my favorite characters, so it's only fair I give him a good turn here. We'll see a lot more of him as the series goes on.

Thanks! 




Mad-Eye Moody Returns
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
05/04/2006 01:27 pm
wow! now that is an original story!   the plan is so well told that it is easily believable!   great job!


Choices and Changes
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/25/2006 04:40 pm

Nice chapter... you might want to put some space or a line break between POV-switches, just a thought. But I ADORE your Moody - his line about them never actually encountering him was fantastic - and the Dennis conversation was great.

Marvelous work; keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks--Moody's one of my favorites. The quintessential grumpy old man.

Unfortunately the spaces between POVs got deleted when I added the story. I've seen this kind of problem before. From now on I'll rely on horizontal rules.

~S




Mad-Eye Moody Returns
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/21/2006 06:15 pm

This is lovely. Very real, and you made Dumbledore human, which was refreshing.

Nice job, and I'll keep an eye out for the next update of this.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I find I have no trouble writing old folks like Dumbledore and Mad-Eye. It's the young people who give me grief.

Hope to hear from you again. 




Choices and Changes
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
04/21/2006 05:23 pm
I like your plot that you have going here, it has me hooked already! Though I think you do Dumbledore a tad different than we see him in the books, I like how you characterize him. I adore how you characterize Harry, though. I wonder what the journey will entail, and if they'll get it. I hope to see more up soon!


Choices and Changes
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