please please PLEASE update soon!! This is an amazingly good story (I've lost two nights of sleep over it lol!) I want to know what happens!!! Great great job!!!
This is the first story I've read on this site... I'm not even sure how i found it lol. But I'm glad I did. I haven't read a story this original for a long long time, and you've managed to keep everyone in character doing it. It's a wonderful story and I'm going to look forward to reading the rest.
On a side note, If you need a Brit picker you can email me at firstname.lastname@example.org. I did notice a couple of rather american phrases.
Really at the heart of this review... I just wanted to say thankyou.
As always, brilliant work. So this was Dahlia's last battle... How very sad, but also, how very beautiful.
I can't wait to see where this will go next, and how Harry's return to civilisation will play out. Keep up the amazing work!
Oh, this is evil. How could you simply stop here???
What's happening at hogwarts? Would Harry's magic work agaist the Dementors, since they are basically magical creatures? Could he simply, well, will them out of existence?
Please update soon!!!
I wouldn't want to stop, except I'm afraid to continue.
About the Dementors, Harry can, but it's a moot question since by now all the Dementors have been wiped out.
Poor Moody! That certainly wasn't pretty, lol. I hope he survives to finish this thing once and for all...
I was so glad to have a new chapter so soon! Really brilliant work.<> Cathy
That was brilliant. I absolutely love your dueling scenes, and how you managed not to make Harry into an all-powerful caracter. After all, his ability is only useful if he is in a position to use it... Really good work. Please don't leave as hanging too long! Everything is closing so fast, I can't wait to see how you'll untangle all the messes, and see how all the different plot lines come together.
Thanks Cathy. I was tempted to leave Harry out of the fight all together, but realized that I need to demonstrate his newfound power in the real world. Now he just needs the wisdom to match it.
Thanks fo reading!
Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy. I really appreciate the comment, and that you understood where the story was coming from. This is actually one of my favorite parts, despite the darkness. And you really nailed it--in the end, this entire story is about love.
Keep it up, and don't leave us hanging too long, ok?