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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
07/08/2006 05:11 am
It's a nice start for a first attempt. Slightly choppy, but I'm sure with the way you write now, it shouldn;t be a problem to make it flow more..great work

Author's Response:

That's prolly because it was approved before a beta could fix it. I'll ask her to check it, so that I can update it.




Prologue
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/29/2006 04:23 pm
Great chapter, again. Good descriptions, I can't wait to see how Alexandra does at Hogwarts, and about her horse :P nice job


Author's Response:

Many thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're reading my other story as well. Yes, Alexandra is going to face a very intense school year. I hope you'll like how her character develops and, don't worry, you'll see more of her horse as well.

Love

Alessandra




The Job Interview
Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
04/22/2006 11:19 pm
Interesting. I think you have a great start here. Keep it up!


Author's Response:

Many thanks for reviewing. I hope you'll like the rest of the story as much. This story is complete, so you'll see me upload new chapters very often.

Keep reading!




Prologue
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/21/2006 12:52 pm
nice job, good description. it will be intereting as to who the new Charms treacher will be. good start.


Author's Response:

Many thanks for reviewing. Your curiosity about the new teacher is my best reward. I hope you won't be disappointed when you see who it is in the next chapter. As this story is complete, I'll try to post each new chapters as soon as I can.

Keep reading!  




Prologue
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