Author's Response: glad you are enjoying, remember to keep checking back frequently for updates seeing as this and it's sequel are already completed and book 3 only has 2 more chaps to go! (if you really really cant wait lol, you may also go to fanfiction.net under the same penname and read it there)
Author's Response: glad you are enjoying, remember to keep checking back frequently for updates seeing as this and it's sequel are already completed and book 3 only has 2 more chaps to go! (if you really really cant wait lol, you may also go to fanfiction.net under the same penname and read it there)
An interesting start. You write Draco well - I also loved Snape's quiet understanding and support of his character - but I think your Hermione is a little weak. You'd think she'd have more edge, given all that's gone on.
Still, a good start and I'll keep reading!
Author's Response: thank you for your words ladylarna--just keep on reading, this story is already finished so i'm gonna be updating it very very rapidly! i hope you like the way i play hermione as it keeps moving as she is in fact the center really of the entire series (even though it's draco and hermione) ~kai