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Reviewer: XxXCrookshanksXxXP3 (Signed)
04/19/2006 12:46 pm
ooooh, this is getting intresting, on to the next chapter...


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Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
04/18/2006 10:12 pm
Ahh!! I hate it when you writers leave readers hanging like that!! I will have to keep my eyes on this story. It's wonderful



It Begins
Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
04/18/2006 10:02 pm
wow!!! I haven't read anything quite like this one before. Very interesting concept!!!



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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/18/2006 09:32 pm

This chapter didn't seem quite as strong as the last one, but fair effort nonetheless. I specifically liked the last paragraph/line; it caught my attention and really held some strong emotion.

Keep up the good work!




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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/18/2006 09:29 pm
Ooh, this is intense! Your characterizations are really good, particularly Lucius and Draco. The family - or sort of family, haha - dynamic comes across really strongly. Nice job!


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Reviewer: Amelia (Signed)
04/18/2006 07:45 pm

Nicely written. This has the potential to be an interesting story. Keep writing!




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