I like Draco's very first scene, where he's waking up, it's all very tender and sweet. I can tell that he loves Hermione here. It's really nice.
I'll tell you who's next to die for Draco! SNAPE! HAHA! BURN IN HELL SNAPE! btw- is Filch coming into the story at any time?
Draco's such an EMO! lol..I'm just saying, he's always hurting himself and having rage fits and stuff...okay, so not really emo, I just wanted to accuse him of being something that amused me!
Whoa, okay..finally I almost get a sex scene, and then STUPID HARRY has to ruin it! IDIOT! But that's okay, they're a little young for intercourse anyway, dontcha think? That would have really sucked if they had gone futher when Harry walked in, although I'm sure he knew what was going on by the way they reacted when he walked in. It's kind of funny. Wicked Awesome approved!
So Lupin saw them "sleeping" together, hey? Hmm...I know what'll be happening in Lupin's bathroom later tonight!
It's too bad that Hermione and Draco have to feel so uncomfortable. Just feel good about it. Love is supposed to be like that, not uncomfortable. Plus, Draco's a handsome manboy, it's all good!
I liked Mrs. Weasley, she was very much in character, and oh so very motherly.
YAY! Hagrid! I hope he appears soon too! I take it he will be...?
It's always worse when they're disappointed..like Falesha...it's too bad, but I like that it was pointed out that the boys were important, not just beacuse of the Prophecy, but because she truly cares for them. It's like the Prophecy doesn't even matter to her. It's nice for the boys to have that one adult person who cares for them in that manner, in that role.
Hermione and Ron on the bed...seems to me that Hermione's in everybody's bed around Hogwarts...I never knew she was so LOOSE!
"Hey Mione, you look like you've had a good roll in the hay with Draco" - That is SO ULTIMATE! *mutters under breath 'Draco and every other boy around'*
I really like that there's comedic relief. It's a major point every story should have...even if it's something hardcore, like The English Patiant...or The Bible, or whatever.
Hermione should be able to tell who's voice it is, after all, it does belong to one of her best girl friends...GINNY WEASLEY!
"Hogwarts; A History - Extended Collectors Edition" - I SO KNEW IT! Hermione, Hermione, Hermione...that's oddly enough...why we all love her...except for the haters...of which I am sure there are few.
So, if Hermione got to take her books, how come Ron couldn't grab a souvenir...perhaps a jar of sweets?
Oh geez...and she grabbed books for the boys too...how thrilling...why does Lucius have Animagus books? Does he have an inner slug? No, wait, that's just him. He reminds me of this guy I know, also a slug...his name's Rick, but anyway, that's not important, and neither is Rick, back to the story!
LOL! Oh I got the pun! He learned first hand when the bee stung him! I bet you didn't mean that to be punny, but it was! Good thing he wasn't allegic...or naked...
I like Narcissa. I wouldn't mind if she had been my mom. She was a good mother, she really taught Draco the important things.
Aw, that's really sweet. I love when parents put their own children into the fairy tales, and Draco's princess is totally a foreshadowing of Hermione...but he has to be SUCH a boy and want to fend of a dragon for her...*rolls eyes* boys...can't live with them...yeah...that's about it. Dragons are pretty cool though. Just ask Hagrid, he'll tell you.
"End of story" - WHAT? You can't just end it there! THAT'S INSANE! Oh, wait...how could I be so silly? I still have 8 million words left to read!
I see you've made Hermione wear green, like much of your other readers have suggested...oh well, you've got to please them as well I guess. Red's still the best colour out there though! REMEMBER THAT!
Dontcha just hate it when you go to the Halloween BAll, dressed as something you think is Umber Cool, but them somebody shows up looking all beautiful, and Cinderella storylike? Then you feel REALLY stupid for going as a pumpkin patch or a giant wart!
Draco and Hermione's costumes match perfectly! It's awesome! They could have planned it better!
With all the bling Hermione's got on, she's going to be MUGGED, straight up, I ain't a trippin' boo!
I like the ball-dance, it sounds very well decorated, you've done a great job describing it! It sounds better than my very own grad dance! (lol...ah duh!)
I SO CALLED IT! LUNA FREAKIN' LOVEGOOD - Harry's one true love! I knew it!
You'd think there'd be some backlash against Harry going as Godric gryffindor..the Slytherins couldn't have liked that too much! oh well, I like the idea, it was really original. Great thinking, Amanda!
ALL HAIL THE MACARENA! YES! I loved it! Ron doing the Macarena, this should keep me in high spirits for a little while!
"just until you're incredibly tired and completely unaware of what was happening. So you'd ravage me without thinking twice." - This chapter is so unbelievably SEXUAL! You wrote it especially for me didn't you? Didn't you? Come on now, I know your game!
I like how Harry and Luna are getting along, hopefully there will be lots of romance in store for those two. People will probably dislike some of your decisions...considering Harry and Luna, and especially Ginny...but ignore them, they're stupid anyway!
The songs, although I don't really read much of them, really match to the moment of what's happening, it's pretty awesome! Great job! It's like, totally songfic, but deliciously good! Even though, once again, I don't really read the lyrics after the first two or three, lol...maybe I should be...anyway, I get the point, so that's good enough, right? I came here to read your writing, not Faith Hill's! Who's Faith Hill anyway? NOBODY! She could never comapre to the amazingly talented Amanda _! I'd like to see her even TRY to write a Harry Potter fic even half as good!
WHERE THE STINKIN' F IS DUMBLEDOR! Ron shouldn't be drinking FIREWHISKEY! Now he's made a complete fool of himself, and unleashed his gay side - "oh Harry boy" Ok...um..yeah...* backs away slowly* I like what you've done with it though. Like I said earlier, comedic relief from all this "depressing" lovey-dovey $%&#
It's sad tat Draco will never know who the great and wonderful Hugh Hefner is now...serves him right for always pissing Hermione off! Speaking of pissing...I surely hope Ron did that...he really had to go...
I would have never expected these poor, sweet, innocent Hogwarts boys to be so dang HORNY!
I like how you've described this place they were transported to...it sounds very spooky and ominous. Can't wait until the next chapter. I guess sex scenes are out of the question?
You've really started writing very long chapters. One one hand, it's very cool, on the other...actually, it's mainly cool!
I really liked this chapter, not as much as last chapter, but that's to be expected. Most awesome job, I give you high commending, and I can't wait for you to take over good ol' J.K's job!
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