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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
08/12/2006 02:32 pm

Indeed, your sketch has intrigued me.  I love to hear more about the unexplained arcane devices with which JKR has casually endowed her characters.  You have brought the clocks to a kind of startling life and usefulness in the Headmaster's hidden chamber, and your analysis of Severus Snape's relationship with his two Masters is equally thought-provoking. 

Snippets that gave the piece real life for me:

--the shape of the room and its meager contents--except for the clocks, of course,

--the differences among the clocks,

 --the untouched lemon drops and their reason for being there,

--the word perii on the trunk,

Thanks for a delightful read!


Author's Response: Thanks, Spiderwort. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/18/2006 09:39 pm
One or two minor grammatical glitches aside, this was flawless. Content-wise, you did a really great job on this. Brilliant character study.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing - I'm glad you liked it. Feel free to email me about the grammatical errors. Neither authors nor site mods are perfect, and we're always willing to learn. ;)

Reviewer: Hera Malfoy (Signed)
04/18/2006 01:44 pm
As I have always said, I am a huge Severus Snape fan. He is such a tortured soul. And in a way, so is Dumbledore. This wonderfully illustrates how they are twined together in their misery. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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