Author's Response: Why thank you - I'm glad you liked it
Author's Response: Why thank you - I'm glad you liked it
An interesting start... at one point you put "aloud" instead of "allowed," so be careful on things like that because spellcheck won't fix them.
This should be a different sort of story, so I'll keep an eye out for your updates!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks - yay my first review ever on this site! lol but yes i should get more than one beta, just incase one mises things like what you pointed out - but thank you :)
This was supposed to be just a one shot but i may make a sequal...