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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
05/21/2006 03:20 am
Nice start Paul... I have read S'Tarkin's work and it's brilliant.. this seems like the perfect way to begin



PROLOGUE: Nothing Left To Live For
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
04/19/2006 12:23 pm
i was concerned when i read this since it did mirror one of my favorite fics almost to well... however the chaos that is going to begin looks very interesting!


CHAPTER ONE: The Future?
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/19/2006 11:49 am

*dies laughing at that last sentence* I can totally imagine that, too, him all sheepishly standing there, and haha...

Good chapter.




CHAPTER ONE: The Future?
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/19/2006 11:48 am

Ooh, what a cool start! Watch some of your formatting, and you might want to break some of those long paragraphs into shorter ones, but this is interesting.

If you copy/paste from word, the formatting usually stays the same and all you have to do is italicize, pretty much. Just so you know.

I'll keep reading...




PROLOGUE: Nothing Left To Live For
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