WOW! You right him so well! The complete ir-rationality is perfectly written. Superb!!
Hey! Your portrayal of Dolohov was really good. We never know much of him, except that he cursed Hermione while he was under a silencing charm
I like the way you write too. It has a smooth flow about it. Keep on updating
This is the first Antonin-centric fanfic I've run across, and you did it marvelously. Absolutely chilling, and I love that you focused on someone different and completely pulled it off.