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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/16/2006 07:23 pm
nice story, but the without the right grammer, it was kind of weird to read...*doesn't know if that made sense* I liked the way you set it up, too. good job.



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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/14/2006 09:22 pm
The style of this piece was cool, but watch your grammar (punctuation in particular). Fun work, though!


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