hey great chapter
i like hte way you made harry seem like a cyborg going "affermative" it reminded me of the scene where John Connor tells the Terminator to chill out :p
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Reviews For Learning to Breathe
Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
05/04/2006 03:05 pm
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/04/2006 03:02 pm
Reviewer: Heather (Anonymous)
04/20/2006 10:19 pm
I really enjoy reading this story. In fact, this is my first review that I have ever written. This story is very clear and well written. This story grabbed my attention from the summary and my interest grew with the first chapter. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
04/19/2006 12:02 pm
ok! i'm very intrigued! there have been fics that had harry wondering if he was just a weapon, but here he was raised as one. very scifi... excellent start! can't wait to see where this will go and how ginny will break through his defenses.
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Reviewer: Lazy Lesa (Anonymous)
04/15/2006 09:55 pm
Wow....just...wow. This is....wow. I love it! The summary's off putting, but this is amazing, how you have him so....Harry, yet not Harry...keep it going, please!
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Reviewer: eaglebird (Signed)
04/15/2006 08:26 pm
A most interesting structure to your post-Voldemeort story. I'm curious to see how you develop this new universe with the trio and Ginny and malfoy.
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