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Reviewer: Amelia (Signed)
04/17/2006 09:35 pm

It should be rather humorous once the spell has been cast! But surely witnessing Malfoy pestering a first year wouldn't set Harry and Ron into a fit of rage. Just think of all the things Malfoy has done in the past. Keep writing!



Author's Response:

I think this is them finally deciding to do something about it. Well, a new idea anyway. Thankyou for the review!

Shena




Walk In The Dark
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/14/2006 09:03 pm
Ok...I saw a couple spelling/grammer errors, but other than that, it was pretty good. I don't know if it's just me, but it seems like you're rushing a bit...nice start, though.


Author's Response: Hmmm, i could be rushing it a bit. When I wrote it I was still at the point where it was hard to make chapters long. Thankyou for reading/reviewing!



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