Cool start, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this humanized Lily. You're right, fanfiction does tend to forget that people can be normal, haha. Can't wait for more!
Thanks and take care!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate your reviews! (I like the ones on my other stuff, too :D) I'm glad that you like my humanized version of Lily, she's modeled after me when I was in a similar situation just a few years ago, actually. I hope to hear from you again when I next update!
I'm glad you liked the scenario...I hope to hear from you more as the story wears on and gets into more dialogue and characterization :D
Thanks again for reviewing! I really appreciate it!