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Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/01/2006 08:35 am
Wow, even though since HBP we know it didn't happen this way, your writing is so dramatic and effective I found myself wishing it happened this way instead! I think the very first line of this chapter has a little too much description in it that takes away from the rest of the sentence, but the story itself more than makes up for it. Great job.

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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/30/2006 05:39 pm
That was really good-kind of sad, but really good. nice job.


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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/19/2006 11:58 am
A very strong and dark characterization. Well-written.

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