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Reviewer: mrs_sblack040 (Signed)
05/29/2006 11:06 am

you my friend are brilliant1,000,000,000,999

i swear it

it was beautiful




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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/13/2006 03:27 pm

Haha, cute! Nice ending there, it came across well. I like your Hermione in particular.

*snickers* Unspontaneous. Nice word choice. Made the piece even more fun.

At one point, you had Ron's thoughts and I think you might want to set them in italics to show that they're thoughts, but that was my only nitpick. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad that you liked it!

Yeah, I know I missed the thoughts.  I had this stroy posted at Fanfiction.net and I had to copy/paste it, so the italics didn't go through and I forgot to change it! 




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Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
04/13/2006 02:22 pm
awsome!

Author's Response: Thank you!



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