you my friend are brilliant1,000,000,000,999
i swear it
it was beautiful
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Reviews For Spontaneous
Reviewer: mrs_sblack040 (Signed)
05/29/2006 11:06 am
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/13/2006 03:27 pm
Haha, cute! Nice ending there, it came across well. I like your Hermione in particular.
*snickers* Unspontaneous. Nice word choice. Made the piece even more fun.
At one point, you had Ron's thoughts and I think you might want to set them in italics to show that they're thoughts, but that was my only nitpick. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad that you liked it!
Yeah, I know I missed the thoughts. I had this stroy posted at Fanfiction.net and I had to copy/paste it, so the italics didn't go through and I forgot to change it!
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Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
04/13/2006 02:22 pm