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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/13/2006 03:30 pm
Haha! Okay, so now I'm positive that strong endings are your clear forte. You could have done with a little more build-up and development between their tentative friendship and their real relationship revalation, but you did a nice job with this.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  haha..I think that you're right, I love making great endings, it makes the story even more enjoyable, especially if it's a oneshot.

Yeah, I know about the buildup, I messed up on that!  Oops!

 



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