I certainly thought it was very good. I like that you kind of developed them in the beginning and then they had this little relationship hidden from everyone. Very cool. The ending was prime. I think you should continue you it. Maybe make it two or three chapters, so we know how Ron and Harry feel and then whether or not they accept him! But that's just my opinion. Nice work!
Nice ending! Rather strong display of emotions from the characters though. I doubt Ron would have shouted at Hermione loud enough for the enitre Great Hall to hear. Anyways, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!!
Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it!
I liked the ending too! It made me laugh and I wrote it!
I'm really gald that you liked the way I wrote it, that's what matters the most to me.