Wonderful start. I really loved it.
The flow was just right, the characterizations were good and it was generally very well balanced.
Hope to read more soon.
Very nice! Has a sort of sad, dire feeling to it. It must really suck to be left behind; I know if I was Ginny I woudl be seething with resentment at the same time terror that my friends would die. Nicely written!
---“You could all be marching straight into a vampire cave with signs on your backs that read ‘bite me’.”---
I loved that. LOL
Very nice start!
“I’m a Weasley,” she pointed out needless, “And I’m Ron’s little sister, and I’m your friend, and I’m – well, at least I was – Harry Potter’s girlfriend. But if Ron’s gone, and you’re gone, and Harry’s broken up with me, then all that’s left is … ” she trailed off and then shrugged. “I don’t know what’s left, and that’s the point.”
That is an amazing insight to Ginny's character. And I just love Hermione's reply.
You did a great job with the characterizations in here. Nicely composed.
Dunno if it's just my computer, but the formatting seems off - there's a lot of space between paragraphs - so I just thought I'd mention it.
The writing is ace, though. Marvelous work.