Reviews For Re-run

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Reviewer: Calamur (Anonymous)
04/23/2006 12:27 pm
It's very AU but very interesting. There are some places where you have jumped from one fact to another, which has made the story a wee bit confusing. However don't let that discourage you. Keep on writing and you'll only get better as you keep going



Chapter 1-6: books 1-4
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/13/2006 03:43 pm

This was kinda cool, but really confusing. I think if you find yourself a good beta-reader and develop your short "chapters" into actual full length chapters with more details, then this could potentially be a really good story.

As it stands, though, you have a nifty idea that just hasn't quite come together yet. Nice effort, though.




Chapter 1-6: books 1-4
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