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Reviewer: nidsi (Signed)
05/21/2008 02:51 am
very cool

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Reviewer: Christy (Anonymous)
10/07/2006 08:13 pm
I loved it. This is probably one of my favorite Lily and James one shots. Amazing!

Bicycle Built for Two
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
08/20/2006 10:23 pm

Oooh. I liked this, a lot. *laughs* Especially the ending; that puts the icing on the cake. Haha.

I usually don't like stories like these, but I did like this one because of the other things you tied into it, like the bikes. And I had to smile at the Cheshire cat reference. Very nice job!

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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
08/12/2006 03:19 pm

Oh, this is pure delight  (...and I usually hate smarmy Marauder tales.)

I especially like these images:

He would ask her out time after time, and she would turn him down. Sometimes the question would just pop up out of nowhere, and sometimes he would work up this big scene to catch her full attention.

Her mind screamed “NO!” by default, but her heart took a slow, burning dip into her stomach at the mere thought of him.

And the ending is perfect: shows an impish side to  the rather staid Head Girl.

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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/13/2006 08:46 pm
Adorable! The characters are so wonderfully written. This is a great, believable bridge between the actions we see in OotP, and when Lily must inevitably give it. Love the bicycle, and the ending made me laugh.

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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/13/2006 04:53 pm
*laughs* excelent job! very well written, James and Lily's characters were written perfectly! nice job.

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