Yay! I can't wait to continue with this story, but I have to go to bed. :(
Great start.
This is one of THE BEST fan fics I've EVER read!!!!!! I was happy, sad, angry....I felt every emotion! You are a WONDERFUL writer! I want to read the sequal now!! ^_^
~Anni
Author's Response: Thanks! I liked the 2nd version better, too. The first one always bothered me. I didn't have a clue what I was doing. By the end I'd learned a lot and I wanted the begiining to look like the last few chapters. Even over Shadow of the Serpent I've grown. I'm glad you could tell the difference. ~k~