Reviews For Blaise's Potion

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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/12/2006 07:06 pm
Good job fleshing out an unknown character. He acts like a Slytherin, but he's not a Malfoy clone. That ending was creepy -- I kind of felt sorry for Blaise. Wow, not only to botch up a potion, but having it affect ... ouch!

Author's Response: ::grins:: Thanks!  I like working with characters that are only named.  Gives you more to work with in terms of character.  Of course this was before I knew he was a black kid so my description is off but that's okay.  Yay literary license.


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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/11/2006 05:23 pm

Wow, you really caught the Slytherin aspect of Blaise's mind. Terrific job on that... it made the first half of this extremely believable. The last half was good as well, but it seemed a tad rushed.

Good job, though!



Author's Response: Hello!  Thank you much for the kind words and helpful criticism.  I think I did rush it a bit; I have a bad habit of doing that when I want to convey the story but don't want to over-narrate and make it drag on!  :grin:  It's also my least-edited story.


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