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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
04/12/2006 10:42 pm

Ooh, I love how you set this up. Some favorite lines:

She scowls and almost mutters, “Damn Harry Potter, anyway,” but doesn’t because he’s got enough people cursing him as it is.


For a wild moment she wonders if Lupin is in love with Harry, but then all the pieces fall suddenly into place and she wonders if this is how Hermione normally feels, like all the world’s a puzzle and if you just sort it out the right way, there’s nothing you can’t know or do.


Lupin smiled wryly. “I’ve found that life most often doesn’t care what we want,” he replies, not unsympathetically.

How you worded all of this was really perfect... I adore all your stories now. *laughs* Loved it!!

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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/11/2006 10:26 pm


You packed so much emotion in there... and it hit me really hard. I was stunned for a few minutes after reading it.

Fantastic writing.. keep it up.


Author's Response: This is probably the best HG fic I've written; I'm really very fond of it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the review!

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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/11/2006 04:00 pm
i like it. really well done. I like the POV, too. You don't see many of that type. i love the ending, great job.

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

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