hmm, short but cute
I love this one. I too thought it was too corny to be true.. JK must have had an off day when she wrote that.
Really good stuff.
JKR is fantastic, but romance? Not quite her forte.
Yay! More of your stuff here; I'm excited. :) This one always makes me laugh... oh, HBP. How you failed in so many ways...
I'm actually quite fond of HBP. I need to reread it, still, but I'm pretty sure it's up there with GoF and PoA, among my favorites.
Thanks for the review, and I'm happy this amused you.
I have waaay too much fun playing with JKR's characters. Harry is so, so fun to write.
Glad you liked, and thanks for the feedback!
Author's Response: Thanks!