Reviews For The Last One

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Reviewer: jayley (Signed)
05/25/2006 05:22 pm
that was awesome!


Chapter 2
Reviewer: jayley (Signed)
05/25/2006 05:15 pm
i liked your chessboard analogy!


Chapter One
Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/01/2006 08:21 am
Oh great stuff! I really hope this isn't a one shot, I'm very interested to know what will happen in the last battle! And good to hear that Wormtail got what was coming to him :)


Chapter One
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/25/2006 04:58 pm

Good effort, and the conversation with Dumbledore was interesting. I liked: “You believed that everyone was entitled to a second chance. Just not me. I wasn’t even entitled to a first chance."

Very interesting stuff, there. Keep it up!



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on the second chapter right now.



Chapter One
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