Ham, this was brilliant. I loved it. I had tears in my eyes by the end! This is exactly the kind of thing that Molly would do. You did a wonderful job :)
Ham, it was beautiful...positively beautiful. One of your best works yet. It brought tears to my eyes, and that, my friend, takes some doing.
You captured Molly Weasley perfectly. She is one of my favorite characters in Potterverse, and I can think of no action that is more like her than this one was.
Well done. VERY well done. ~MM~