its great so far. post more soon, or I will kill (jk)
Partying By The Lake
Reviews For Flying In On Us
Reviewer: pheonixfether (Signed)
10/14/2007 03:22 pm
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
04/09/2006 02:04 pm
question: isnt Sirius dead? you mentioned him, and i was just wondering....also, Ginny seemed a little OOC, but not a lot...good start
Author's Response: Yeah but this is an AU story. It stopped being canon at GoF. Sirius is alove and Ginny is a little OOC.
Author's Response: Yeah but this is an AU story. It stopped being canon at GoF. Sirius is alove and Ginny is a little OOC.
Chapter 1
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/06/2006 03:13 pm
I know you declared this as OOC, but remember to still develop your characters and situations. It's a good start, you just need a little work.
Chapter 1