Reviews For Veiled Revelations

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Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
04/10/2006 08:48 am


Erik! I can't believe you're here too! (Dances wildly)

I recently joined this site too, and I must say I love it. The chapters get validated in no time at all, and everyone is very nice and supportive.

 Of course, you know how much I love this story already, but it's been so long since I've read it I think I'll read it again!

And what do you mean by semi-popular? This fic rocks! It needs more publicity, as does Inbetween Now and Then. I'll work on it!

~ Zetera


Head Boy, Head Girl
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/03/2006 08:36 pm

Ace! This looks promising, so I'm really glad you're posting it! I loved the bit about them apparating, haha, it was such a randomly real moment that it made me laugh, and the relationship between James and Sirius is pretty close to how I'd imagined it.

A couple of sections don't seem to flow into each other, but beyond that, this looks good. I look forward to more!

Author's Response: thank you, ladylarna!  it's so exciting to get reviews for this story again!  i must be honest with you: i haven't even looked at this story for some time, seeing as it was finished more than a year ago, and these earliest chapters were written nearly three or so years ago!!  And yeah, sorry about the transitions and continuity.  I was young and dumb when I wrote it...oh wait, I'm still dumb, just a little older..

Head Boy, Head Girl
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