You wrote Susan really well. Considering that she has nobody for her anymore, making her pragmatic was the ideal way to portray her.
And sorry if you saw a review post on gmail and rushed to see my signature. uraj it's me ;)
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Another flawless piece... and I think thats enough said.
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Wow, Larna. You really have a way to make me say, "Wow, that was so... Wow." at the end of all of your stories. I dunno how you do it, but really, this was amazing! I like seeing a change from the usual Trio stories, and I like how you explore the Hufflepuffs. Wonderful job!!
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really nice. good descriptions, too.
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