Reviews For Harry Weasley

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Reviewer: HPLover (Anonymous)
04/07/2006 10:00 pm
I really love this story. Its the first story that I have read on this site so far, I just found out about this site. Please continue with this great story.



Chapter 1
Reviewer: HPLover (Anonymous)
04/07/2006 09:55 pm
I really love this story. Its the first story that I have read on this site so far, I just found out about this site. Please continue with this great story.



Chapter 1
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/05/2006 06:20 pm
Aww, your Harry is so cute! The line about him and Hedwig made me melt, just a little. Good job! :)


Letters and Shopping
Reviewer: murgel (Signed)
04/03/2006 05:43 am
Nice idea. I do like your style. Only, could you put in some more
detail to characters and situations?



Letters and Shopping
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/31/2006 05:38 pm

101 chapters? Wow! Well, it's a promising beginning. I like the premise, though I think you should work on making your dialouge a bit more realistic - just think about how people would say things, and write it like that - Molly's well written, but Sirius's lines could have used a little more flow. Stil, I don't want you to think I didn't enjoy this (believe me, I did!). I just figured I'd toss a little concrit in here, because I figure you can take it. ;) Nice start, and I look forward to reading more!

 Oh, and by the way, the second to last paragraph was my favorite bit. Dunno why, it just made me smile. :) Take care!




Chapter 1
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