Aww, this fic is pretty cute so far! I'm usually not much for Lily/James stuff, but your characterizations of them are really great, and it's refreshing to see such a focus placed on dialouge. My favorite part of all three chapers was this line: “Well, none of you are any fun nowadays what with being in love, being a werewolf and being…well being Pettigrew…”
Haha! Such a fun line. Great job on this, and do keep it up! Rock on!
Author's Response:
Wow my first review from someone who doesn't have to review cos they're my friend!
I'm actually really chuffed with what you've said considering you don't normally read L/J and the fact that you like the characterizations of them now is odd because I feel like I know them a lot better in what I'm writing now which is chapter 16. So hopefully they will improve as the story goes on.
And the dialogue thing! I love dialogue. It's just great. So I' m glad you thought so too.
And that it was funny. That is coool.
Thank you so much for reviewing! Livs xxx