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Reviewer: iluvjames (Anonymous)
06/08/2006 09:03 am
this is great!! i really liked it; you portrayed the charcters & situation v well & its fantastically written. i had tears in my eyes reading it!! well done xx


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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/07/2006 12:43 pm

Nice job on this; it's very emotionally charged. Try to spread the lyrics out a bit more next time - just to help the flow - but your writing is quite good.

Keep it up!




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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/29/2006 06:01 pm
excelent. i could tell you put a lot of time into this story. great job.


Author's Response: Thank you!



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